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作業二很快就出來了，題目是：It should be law！因為最近溫室效應的話題實在太火紅了，所以就決定用溫室效應當做內容。第一次送出，分數普普。於是，很想根據系統的建議繼續修改，把分數提高一點，但發現，怎麼給的意見回饋跟作業一幾乎都一樣。我開始懷疑，這些回饋罐頭，根本太過一般性，沒有根據文章內容而調整...


這個發現，讓我的寫作動機在這個炎炎夏日，突然冰凍了起來。修改方向只能考自己摸索，後來又改了兩個版本，就草草結束了。原來，這個系統名稱叫 "My" Access 啊！！

It should be law (ver1)

 

Have you ever seen the movie “an inconvenient truth” that records Gore’s speech about the global warming issue? Could you imagine the scenario that a number of polar bears die owing to the lack of ice blocks to rest? The Earth is the one and the only one “mother” for all lives; however, she is now under the attack of fever caused from the global warming. The global warming not only influences our health, but also threatens other animals’ lives. Therefore, it should be law to protect and cure our “mother.”

 

Two causes result in the global warming. The first cause is the oil extraction. In the past two hundreds of years, human civilization has a great leap because of the oil extraction. Although driving the rapid development of human society, the oil usage results in a serious problem: carbon dioxide. For instance, the oil enables people to transport from one place to another place through airplanes, trains, or cars. Nevertheless, these transportations also produce a great deal of carbon dioxide that increases gradually the temperature of the Earth.

 

Furthermore, the second cause that leads to the global warming is the disappearance of forest. Trees are the doctors for dirty air, since they have the capability to transform carbon dioxide into oxygen, a vital element for lives. In other words, if we forest the Earth with a great number of trees, the terrible dirty air would be transformed into clear and fresh air. However, because the woods are one of significant resources of construction, more and more forests are disappearing from the Earth. This cause aggravates the degree of global warming.

 

Therefore, it is emergent to evoke people’s environmental consciousness through law-making. The effective approach to the global warming issue is to make laws for eliminating the two causes described above. In terms of the oil extraction, we should enact laws to encourage the seeking for alternative energy, such as solar power, wind power, and water power. Once the oil is not the major energy for living, the amount of produced carbon dioxide would be decreased. In terms of the disappearance of forest, we should enact laws to forbid cutting trees. I believe that these laws could prevent the death of polar bears; these laws could help our “mother” become healthier and healthier.